Ok, im recording some stuff too, i have a marshall mgdfx 15 with a line out, when i take a lead from the line out and plug it in my pc's mic input i get nothing, whats going wrong. Sorry for the Hijack.
I think your playing is good, much better that me anyway. The mix now is good i enjoyed listening to it. Walking at night it remids me of the sound track of a play i saw called in to the dark, it fits the discription you gave well.